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Basic Essay Structure
TITLE/QUESTION
Every essay title contains an explicit or implicit question. Your essay should focus on answering that question. Try rewriting the title so that it is a question.INTRODUCTION: (about 10% of the essay)
- Explain how you interpret the title
- What issues/topics are you going to explore?
- What will be your focus?
- What will your essay show?
MAIN BODY (about 80% of the essay)
Use a chain of paragraphs to EXPLORE AND DEVELOP your ideas/argument.You will probably have 4 or 5 main topics.
Each topic will need 3 or 4 paragraphs in which you will introduce the topic, and present examples and evidence to show why it is important and how it links to the essay title
In each paragraph the reader is asking you to explain:
- What is this paragraph about?
- What is your argument on this?
- What is your evidence? What does it mean?
- How does it link to the essay title?
- How does it link to the topic in the next paragraph?
CONCLUSION (about 10% of the essay)
- Do not introduce any NEW material here.
- Summarise your ideas/argument (you might also have done this in your introduction)
- Restate what you consider to be the main points
- Make it clear why those conclusions are important or significant.
- In your last sentence: link your conclusions or recommendations back to the title.
Reference List
Use the Harvard Referencing System to list all the books, articles, materials you have referred to in your essay- AUTHOR (date) Title. Town; Publisher.
- Page numbers.
- In alphabetical order by author's surname.
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writing,
Punctuation
Punctuation is used to create sense, clarity and stress in sentences.
You use punctuation marks to structure and organise your writing.
You can quickly see why punctuation is important if you try and read this sentence which has no punctuation at all:
perhaps you dont always need to use commas periods colons etc to make sentences clear when i am in a hurry tired cold lazy or angry i sometimes leave out punctuation marks grammar is stupid i can write without it and dont need it my uncle Harry once said he was not very clever and i never understood a word he wrote to me i think ill learn some punctuation not too much enough to write to Uncle Harry he needs some help
Now let's see if punctuating it makes a difference!
Perhaps you don't always need to use commas, periods, colons etc. to make sentences clear. When I am in a hurry, tired, cold, lazy, or angry I sometimes leave out punctuation marks. "Grammar is stupid! I can write without it and don't need it," my uncle Harry once said. He was not very clever, and I never understood a word he wrote to me. I think I'll learn some punctuation - not too much, enough to write to Uncle Harry. He needs some help!
Use the pages in this punctuation section to learn how to make your English clearer and better organised.
There are some general rules which you can apply when using the comma. However, you will find that in English there are many other ways to use the comma to add to the meaning of a sentence or to emphasise an item, point, or meaning.
Although we are often taught that commas are used to help us add 'breathing spaces' to sentences they are, in fact, more accurately used to organise blocks of thought or logical groupings. Most people use commas to ensure that meaning is clear and, despite grammatical rules, will drop a comma if their meaning is retained without it.
I detest liars like you; I believe that honesty is the best policy. = I detest you because you are a liar.
I detest liars, like you; I believe that honesty is the best policy. = You and I both detest liars.
The Exlamation Mark
The Question Mark
You can quickly see why punctuation is important if you try and read this sentence which has no punctuation at all:
perhaps you dont always need to use commas periods colons etc to make sentences clear when i am in a hurry tired cold lazy or angry i sometimes leave out punctuation marks grammar is stupid i can write without it and dont need it my uncle Harry once said he was not very clever and i never understood a word he wrote to me i think ill learn some punctuation not too much enough to write to Uncle Harry he needs some help
Now let's see if punctuating it makes a difference!
Perhaps you don't always need to use commas, periods, colons etc. to make sentences clear. When I am in a hurry, tired, cold, lazy, or angry I sometimes leave out punctuation marks. "Grammar is stupid! I can write without it and don't need it," my uncle Harry once said. He was not very clever, and I never understood a word he wrote to me. I think I'll learn some punctuation - not too much, enough to write to Uncle Harry. He needs some help!
Use the pages in this punctuation section to learn how to make your English clearer and better organised.
The Period, Full Stop or Point
The
period (known as a full stop in British English) is probably the
simplest of the punctuation marks to use. You use it like a knife to cut
the sentences to the required length. Generally, you can break up the
sentences using the full stop at the end of a logical and complete
thought that looks and sounds right to you.
Mark the end of a sentence which is not a question or an exclamation
Examples
- Rome is the capital of Italy.
- I was born in Australia and now live in Indonesia.
- The Dalai Lama is the spiritual leader of the Tibetan people.
Indicate an abbreviation
Many abbreviations require a period. Dr, Mr, Mrs, and Ms do not take a period in British English, nor do most abbreviations taken from the first capital letters such as MA, Phd, or CIA. In American English, some of these do require periods or both usages are correct (with and without periods). If you require 100% accuracy in your punctuation, refer to a detailed style guide for the abbreviation usage rules in the variety of English you are using.Examples
- I will arrive between 6 a.m. and 7 a.m.
- We are coming on Fri., Jan. 4.
Ellipsis
Often you will see a sentence concluding with three dots. This indicates that only part of the sentence or text has been quoted or that it is being left up to the reader to complete the thought.Examples
- The Lord's Prayer begins, "Our Father which art in Heaven...'"
- He is always late, but you know how I feel about that...
Period after a single word
Sometimes a single word can form the sentence. In this case you place a fullstop after the word as you would in any other sentence. This is often the case when the subject is understood as in a greeting or a command.Examples
- "Goodbye."
- "Stop."
Periods in numbers
Numbers use periods in English to separate the whole number from the decimal. A period used in a number is also called a "decimal point" and it is read "point" unless it refers to money.Examples
- 10.43$ = ten dollars and 43 cents
- 14.17 = fourteen point one seven
The Comma
There are some general rules which you can apply when using the comma. However, you will find that in English there are many other ways to use the comma to add to the meaning of a sentence or to emphasise an item, point, or meaning.
Although we are often taught that commas are used to help us add 'breathing spaces' to sentences they are, in fact, more accurately used to organise blocks of thought or logical groupings. Most people use commas to ensure that meaning is clear and, despite grammatical rules, will drop a comma if their meaning is retained without it.
Separate phrases, words, or clauses in lists
When making a list, commas are the most common way to separate one list item from the next. The final two items in the list are usually separated by "and" or "or", which should be preceeded by a comma. Amongst editors this final comma in a list is known as the "Oxford Comma".A series of independant clauses (sentences)
Examples
- I met Harry, we went for a swim together, and afterwards Harry went home.
- I like your son, I might even love him, but he is not a very good soccer player.
a series of nouns
Examples
- For dinner I had soup, fish, chicken, dessert, and coffee.
- This afternoon I went to Oxford Circus, Picadilly, Hamstead, and Gatwick Airport.
a series of adjectives
A list of adjectives usually requires commas. However, if an adjective is modifying another adjective you do not separate them with a comma (sentence 3).Examples
- She was young, beautiful, kind, and intelligent.
- The house we visited was dark, dreary, and run-down.
- She was wearing a bright red shirt.
a series of verbs
Examples
- Tony ran towards me, fell, yelled, and fainted.
- The boy leapt, spun, twisted, and dove into the water.
a series of phrases
Examples
- The car smashed into the wall, flipped onto its roof, slid along the road, and finally stopped against a tree.
- The dog leapt into the air, snatched the frisbee in its mouth, landed, and ran off into the forest.
Enclosing details
Use a comma to enclose non-defining relative clauses and other non-essential details and comments. The comma is placed on either side of the insertion.Examples
- China, one of the most powerful nations on Earth, has a huge population.
- Jason's grandmother, who was born in 1930, lived through the Second World War.
- Cats, unlike dogs, do not respect their masters.
- My friend, Jim, likes to go scuba diving.
Participial phrases
Examples
- Hearing that her father was in hospital, Jane left work immediately.
- Walking to the bus stop that morning, Sam knew it was going to be a special day.
Tag questions
Examples
- She lives in Paris, doesn't she?
- We haven't met, have we?
Interjections
Examples
- Yes, I will stay a little longer, thank you.
- No, he isn't like other boys.
- Wait, I didn't mean to scare you.
A final warning
Putting a comma in the wrong place can lead to a sentence with a completely different meaning, look at these two sentences:I detest liars like you; I believe that honesty is the best policy. = I detest you because you are a liar.
I detest liars, like you; I believe that honesty is the best policy. = You and I both detest liars.
The Exlamation Mark
The
exclamation mark is used to express exasperation, astonishment, or
surprise, or to emphasise a comment or short, sharp phrase. In
professional or everyday writing, exclamation marks are used sparingly
if at all.
You can also use exclamation marks to mark a phrase as humourous, ironic or sarcastic.
In very informal writing styles (SMS, chat, Twitter or Facebook,
etc.), an exclamation mark is sometimes combined with a question mark to
indicate both surprise and slight uncertainty. Double and triple
exclamation marks are common in very informal writing styles, but are a
sign of being uneducated in less casual correspondance.
Examples
- Help! Help!
- That's unbelievable!
- Get out!
- Look out!
Examples
- What a lovely day! (when it obviously is not a lovely day)
- That was clever! (when someone has done something stupid)
Examples of casual writing
- He's getting married!?
- That's insane!!!
The Question Mark
Use the question mark at the end of all direct questions.
Do not use a question mark for reported questions
Long questions still need question marks
Question marks can sometimes appear within sentences
The Colon
Examples
- What is your name?
- Do you speak Italian?
- You're spanish, aren't you?
Examples
- He asked me what my name was.
- She asked if I was Spanish.
- Ask them where they are going.
Examples
- Isn't it true that global warming is responsible for more and more problems which are having a disastrous effect on the world's climate and leading to many millions of people in countries that can least afford it having to contend with more and more hardship?
- Why is it that even though you are unkind to me, ignore me when I ask you for help, and consistently forget to thank me when I do favors for you, you still claim to want me to be your friend and appear surprised when I prefer to hang out with other people?
Examples
- There is cause for concern (isn't there?) that the current world economic balance is so fragile that it may lead to a global economic downturn.
- "Why is she here?" asked Henry.
The
colon expands on the sentence that precedes it, often introducing a
list that demonstrates or elaborates whatever was previously stated.
The colon is also used to divide the hour from the minutes in writing a time in English.
Examples
- There are many reasons for poor written communication: lack of planning, poor grammar, misuse of punctuation marks, and insufficient vocabulary.
- He collected a strange assortment of items: bird's eggs, stamps, bottle tops, string, and buttons.
- Peter had an eclectic taste in music: latin, jazz, country and western, pop, blues, and classical.
- He had just one fault: an enormous ego.
Examples
- 4:15 = "four fifteen"
- 6:45 = "six fourty-five"
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Punctuation,
Capitalization
Capitalization Rules
Capitalization is the writing of a word with its first letter in uppercase and the remaining letters in lowercase. Experienced writers are stingy with capitals. It is best not to use them if there is any doubt.
Rule 1. Capitalize the first word of a document and the first word after a period.
Rule 2. Capitalize proper nouns—and adjectives derived from proper nouns.
Capitalization Reference List
Lowercase Reference List
Here is a list of categories not capitalized unless an item contains a proper noun or proper adjective (or, sometimes, a trademark). In such cases, only the proper noun or adjective is capitalized.
Examples:
the Golden Gate Bridge
the Grand Canyon
a Russian song
a Shakespearean sonnet
a Freudian slip
With the passage of time, some words originally derived
from proper nouns have taken on a life, and authority, of their own and
no longer require capitalization.the Golden Gate Bridge
the Grand Canyon
a Russian song
a Shakespearean sonnet
a Freudian slip
Examples:
herculean (from the ancient-Greek hero Hercules)
quixotic (from the hero of the classic novel Don Quixote)
draconian (from ancient-Athenian lawgiver Draco)
The main function of capitals is to focus attention on
particular elements within any group of people, places, or things. We
can speak of a lake in the middle of the country, or we can be more specific and say Lake Michigan, which distinguishes it from every other lake on earth.herculean (from the ancient-Greek hero Hercules)
quixotic (from the hero of the classic novel Don Quixote)
draconian (from ancient-Athenian lawgiver Draco)
Capitalization Reference List
- Brand names
- Companies
- Days of the week and months of the year
- Governmental matters
Congress (but congressional), the U.S. Constitution (but constitutional), the Electoral College, Department of Agriculture. Note: Many authorities do not capitalize federal or state unless it is part of the official title: State Water Resources Control Board, but state water board; Federal Communications Commission, but federal regulations. - Historical episodes and eras
the Inquisition, the American Revolutionary War, the Great Depression - Holidays
- Institutions
Oxford College, the Juilliard School of Music - Manmade structures
the Empire State Building, the Eiffel Tower, the Titanic - Manmade territories
Berlin, Montana, Cook County - Natural and manmade landmarks
Mount Everest, the Hoover Dam - Nicknames and epithets
Andrew "Old Hickory" Jackson; Babe Ruth, the Sultan of Swat - Organizations
American Center for Law and Justice, Norwegian Ministry of the Environment - Planets
Mercury, Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Neptune, but policies vary on capitalizing earth, and it is usually not capitalized unless it is being discussed specifically as a planet: We learned that Earth travels through space at 66,700 miles per hour. - Races, nationalities, and tribes
Eskimo, Navajo, East Indian, Caucasian, African American (Note: white and black in reference to race are lowercase) - Religions and names of deities
Note: Capitalize the Bible (but biblical). Do not capitalize heaven, hell, the devil, satanic. - Special occasions
the Olympic Games, the Cannes Film Festival - Streets and roads
Lowercase Reference List
Here is a list of categories not capitalized unless an item contains a proper noun or proper adjective (or, sometimes, a trademark). In such cases, only the proper noun or adjective is capitalized.
- Animals
antelope, black bear, Bengal tiger, yellow-bellied sapsucker, German shepherd - Elements
Always lowercase, even when the name is derived from a proper noun: einsteinium, nobelium, californium - Foods
Lowercase except for brand names, proper nouns and adjectives, or custom-named recipes: Tabasco sauce, Russian dressing, pepper crusted bluefin tuna, Mandy's Bluefin Surprise - Heavenly bodies besides planets
Never capitalize the moon or the sun. - Medical conditions
Epstein-Barr syndrome, tuberculosis, Parkinson's disease - Minerals
- Plants, vegetables, and fruits
poinsettia, Douglas fir, Jerusalem artichoke, organic celery, Golden Delicious apples - Seasons and seasonal data
spring, summertime, the winter solstice, the autumnal equinox, daylight saving time
Rule 3. A thorny aspect of capitalization: where does it stop? When does the Iraq war become the Iraq War? Why is the legendary Hope Diamond not the Hope diamond? Everyone writes New York City, so why does the Associated Press Stylebook recommend New York state?
There aren't always easy formulas or logical explanations. Research
with reference books and search engines is the best strategy.
In the case of brand names, companies are of little help, because they capitalize any word that applies to their merchandise. Domino's Pizza or Domino's pizza? Is it Ivory Soap or Ivory soap, a Hilton Hotel or a Hilton hotel? Most writers don't capitalize common nouns that simply describe the products (pizza, soap, hotel), but it's not always easy to determine where a brand name ends. There is Time magazine but also the New York Times Magazine. No one would argue with Coca-Cola or Pepsi Cola, but a case could be made for Royal Crown cola.
If a trademark starts with a lowercase word or letter (e.g., eBay, iPhone), many authorities advise capitalizing it to begin a sentence.
In the case of brand names, companies are of little help, because they capitalize any word that applies to their merchandise. Domino's Pizza or Domino's pizza? Is it Ivory Soap or Ivory soap, a Hilton Hotel or a Hilton hotel? Most writers don't capitalize common nouns that simply describe the products (pizza, soap, hotel), but it's not always easy to determine where a brand name ends. There is Time magazine but also the New York Times Magazine. No one would argue with Coca-Cola or Pepsi Cola, but a case could be made for Royal Crown cola.
If a trademark starts with a lowercase word or letter (e.g., eBay, iPhone), many authorities advise capitalizing it to begin a sentence.
Example: EBay opened strong in trading today.
Rule 4.
Capitalize titles when they are used before names, unless the title is
followed by a comma. Do not capitalize the title if it is used after a
name or instead of a name.
Examples:
The president will address Congress.
Chairman of the Board William Bly will preside at the conference.
The chairman of the board, William Bly, will preside.
The senators from Iowa and Ohio are expected to attend.
Also expected to attend are Senators Buzz James and Eddie Twain.
The governors, lieutenant governors, and attorneys general called for a special task force.
Governor Fortinbrass, Lieutenant Governor Poppins, and Attorney General Dalloway will attend.
The president will address Congress.
Chairman of the Board William Bly will preside at the conference.
The chairman of the board, William Bly, will preside.
The senators from Iowa and Ohio are expected to attend.
Also expected to attend are Senators Buzz James and Eddie Twain.
The governors, lieutenant governors, and attorneys general called for a special task force.
Governor Fortinbrass, Lieutenant Governor Poppins, and Attorney General Dalloway will attend.
NOTE
Out of respect, some writers and publishers choose to capitalize the highest ranks in government, royalty, religion, etc.
Examples:
The President arrived.
The Queen spoke.
The Pope decreed.
Many American writers believe this to be a wrongheaded
policy in a country where, theoretically, all humans are perceived as
equal.The President arrived.
The Queen spoke.
The Pope decreed.
Rule 5. Titles are not the same as occupations. Do not capitalize occupations before full names.
Examples:
director Steven Spielberg
owner Helen Smith
coach Biff Sykes
Sometimes the line between title and occupation gets blurred. One example is general manager: is it a title or an occupation? Opinions differ. Same with professor: the Associated Press Stylebook considers professor a job description rather than a title, and recommends using lowercase even before the full name: professor Robert Ames.director Steven Spielberg
owner Helen Smith
coach Biff Sykes
Rule 6a. Capitalize a formal title when it is used as a direct address.
Example: Will you take my temperature, Doctor?
Rule 6b.
Capitalize relatives' family names (kinship names) when they
immediately precede a personal name, or when they are used alone in
place of a personal name.
Examples:
I found out that Mom is here.
You look good, Grandpa.
Andy and Opie loved Aunt Bee's apple pies.
However, these monikers are not capitalized with
possessive nouns or pronouns, when they follow the personal name, or
when they are not referencing a specific person.I found out that Mom is here.
You look good, Grandpa.
Andy and Opie loved Aunt Bee's apple pies.
Examples:
My mom is here.
Joe's grandpa looks well.
The James brothers were notorious robbers.
There's not one mother I know who would allow that.
My mom is here.
Joe's grandpa looks well.
The James brothers were notorious robbers.
There's not one mother I know who would allow that.
Rule 6c. Capitalize nicknames in all cases.
Examples:
Meet my brothers, Junior and Scooter.
I just met two guys named Junior and Scooter.
Meet my brothers, Junior and Scooter.
I just met two guys named Junior and Scooter.
Rule 7. Capitalize specific geographical regions. Do not capitalize points of the compass.
Examples:
We had three relatives visit from the West.
Go west three blocks and then turn left.
We left Florida and drove north.
We live in the Southeast.
We live in the southeast section of town.
Most of the West Coast is rainy this time of year. (referring to the United States)
The west coast of Scotland is rainy this time of year.
Some areas have come to be capitalized for their fame or notoriety:We had three relatives visit from the West.
Go west three blocks and then turn left.
We left Florida and drove north.
We live in the Southeast.
We live in the southeast section of town.
Most of the West Coast is rainy this time of year. (referring to the United States)
The west coast of Scotland is rainy this time of year.
Examples:
I'm from New York's Upper West Side.
I'm from the South Side of Chicago.
You live in Northern California; he lives in Southern California.
I'm from New York's Upper West Side.
I'm from the South Side of Chicago.
You live in Northern California; he lives in Southern California.
Rule 8. In general, do not capitalize the word the before proper nouns.
Examples:
I'm reading the London Times.
They're fans of the Grateful Dead.
In special cases, if the word the is an inseparable part of something's official title, it may be capitalized.I'm reading the London Times.
They're fans of the Grateful Dead.
Example: We visited The Hague.
Rule 9. Do not capitalize city, town, county, etc., if it comes before the proper name.
Examples:
the city of New York
New York City
the county of Marin
Marin County
the city of New York
New York City
the county of Marin
Marin County
Rule 10. Always capitalize the first word in a complete quotation, even midsentence.
Example: Bill said, "That job we started last April is done."
Rule 11. For emphasis, writers sometimes capitalize a midsentence independent clause or question.
Examples:
One of her cardinal rules was, Never betray a friend.
It made me wonder, What is mankind's destiny?
One of her cardinal rules was, Never betray a friend.
It made me wonder, What is mankind's destiny?
Rule 12. Capitalize the names of specific course titles, but not general academic subjects.
Examples:
I must take history and Algebra 101.
He has a double major in European economics and philosophy.
I must take history and Algebra 101.
He has a double major in European economics and philosophy.
Rule 13. Capitalize art movements.
Example: I like Surrealism, but I never understood Abstract Expressionism.
Rule 14. Do not capitalize the first item in a list that follows a colon.
Example: Bring the following: paper, a pencil, and a snack.
For more on capitalization after a colon, go to "Colons," Rules 1, 3, and 4.
Rule 15. Do not capitalize "the national anthem."
Rule 16a.
Composition titles: which words should be capitalized in titles of
books, plays, films, songs, poems, essays, chapters, etc.? This is a
vexing matter, and policies vary. The usual advice is to capitalize only
the "important" words. But this isn't really very helpful. Aren't all
words in a title important?
The following rules for capitalizing composition titles are universal.
The major bone of contention is prepositions. The Associated Press Stylebook recommends capitalizing all prepositions of more than three letters (e.g., With, About, Across). Others advise lowercase until a preposition reaches five or more letters. Still others say not to capitalize any preposition, even big words like regarding or underneath.
Hyphenated words in a title also present problems. There are no set rules. Some writers, editors, and publishers choose not to capitalize words following hyphens unless they are proper nouns or proper adjectives (Ex-Marine but Ex-husband). Others capitalize any word that would otherwise be capped in titles (Prize-Winning, Up-to-Date).
The following rules for capitalizing composition titles are universal.
- Capitalize the title's first and last word.
- Capitalize verbs, including all forms of the verb to be (is, are, was, etc.).
- Capitalize all pronouns, including it, he, who, that, etc.
- Capitalize not.
- Do not capitalize a, an, or the unless it is first or last in the title.
- Do not capitalize the word and, or, or nor unless it is first or last in the title.
- Do not capitalize the word to, with or without an infinitive, unless it is first or last in the title.
The major bone of contention is prepositions. The Associated Press Stylebook recommends capitalizing all prepositions of more than three letters (e.g., With, About, Across). Others advise lowercase until a preposition reaches five or more letters. Still others say not to capitalize any preposition, even big words like regarding or underneath.
Hyphenated words in a title also present problems. There are no set rules. Some writers, editors, and publishers choose not to capitalize words following hyphens unless they are proper nouns or proper adjectives (Ex-Marine but Ex-husband). Others capitalize any word that would otherwise be capped in titles (Prize-Winning, Up-to-Date).
Rule 16b.
Many books have subtitles. When including these, put a colon after the
work's title and follow the same rules of composition capitalization for
the subtitle.
Suppose you are reviewing a book whose title on the cover is in capital letters: THE STUFF OF THOUGHT. Beneath, in smaller capital letters, is the subtitle, LANGUAGE AS A WINDOW INTO HUMAN NATURE. All sides would agree that the main title should be written, The Stuff of Thought. But depending on which capitalization policy you choose, the subtitle might be any of the following:
Example: The King's English: A Guide to Modern Usage
Note that A is capitalized because it is the first word of the subtitle.Suppose you are reviewing a book whose title on the cover is in capital letters: THE STUFF OF THOUGHT. Beneath, in smaller capital letters, is the subtitle, LANGUAGE AS A WINDOW INTO HUMAN NATURE. All sides would agree that the main title should be written, The Stuff of Thought. But depending on which capitalization policy you choose, the subtitle might be any of the following:
Language As a Window Into Human Nature
Language as a Window Into Human Nature
Language As a Window into Human Nature
Language as a Window into Human Nature
Capitalizing composition titles is fraught with gray areas. Pick a policy and be consistent.Language as a Window Into Human Nature
Language As a Window into Human Nature
Language as a Window into Human Nature
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Paragraph
How To Write Paragraph
1.Plan Your Paragraph
1.Plan Your Paragraph
Decide what the main topic of the paragraph is going to be.
Before you begin writing your paragraph, you must have a clear idea of
what the paragraph is going to be about. This is because a paragraph is
essentially a collection of sentences which all relate to one central
topic.[1]
Without a definite idea of what the main topic is, your paragraph will
lack focus and unity. In order to pin down the exact topic of your
paragraph, you should ask yourself a number of questions:
- What is the prompt I have been given? If you are writing a paragraph as a response or answer to a particular prompt, such as "You have decided to donate money to charity. Which charity do you choose and why?" or "Describe your favorite day of the week," you will need to think carefully about that prompt and make sure you are directly addressing it, rather than going off topic.
- What are the main ideas or issues that I need to address? Think about the topic you are being asked or have decided to write about and consider what the most relevant ideas or issues relating to that topic are. As paragraphs are usually relatively short, it is important that you try to hit on all of the main ideas, without going off topic.
- Who am I writing for? Think about who the intended readership of this paragraph or paper is going to be. What is their prior knowledge? Are they familiar with the topic at hand, or will it require a number of explanatory sentences?
- At this point, you may realize that there's a gap in your knowledge and that it will be necessary to look up some facts and figures to support your argument.
- It's a good idea to do this research now, so you will have all the relevant information easily at hand when it comes to the writing stage
Figure out how you want to structure your paragraph.
Now that all of your thoughts, ideas, facts and figures are laid out
clearly in front of you, you can start to think about how you want to
structure your paragraph. Consider each of the points you wish to
address and try to arrange them in a logical order - this will make your
paragraph more coherent and easier to read.[3]
- This new order may be chronological, may put the most important information first, or may just make the paragraph easier and more interesting to read - it all depends on the topic and style of the paragraph you wish to write.[3]
- Once you have decided where you want everything to go, you can rewrite your points according to this new structure - this will help to make the writing process a lot faster and more straightforward.
Write a topic sentence. The first sentence of your
paragraph needs to be the topic sentence. A topic sentence is an
introductory line which addresses what the main idea or thesis of the
paragraph is going to be. It should contain the most important and
relevant point you wish to make regarding your topic, thus summarizing
the paragraph as a whole.[1]
- Every other sentence you write should support the topic sentence and provide further detail and discussion of the issues or ideas it raises. If any sentence you write cannot be directly related to the topic sentence, it should not be included in this particular paragraph.
- More experienced writers can include their topic sentence at any point in the paragraph, it doesn't necessarily need to be the first line. However, writers who are new or less comfortable with paragraph writing should stick with having the topic sentence first, as it will help to guide you throughout the rest of the paragraph.[1]
Fill in the supporting details. Once you have written
and are happy with your topic sentence, you can start to fill in the
rest of your paragraph. This is where the detailed, well-structured
notes you wrote earlier will come in handy. Make sure that your
paragraph is coherent, which means that it is easy to read and
understand, that each sentence connects with the next and that
everything flows nicely as a whole. To achieve this, try to write clear,
simple sentences that express exactly what you want to say.[3]
- Link each sentence with transition words which form a bridge between one sentence and the next. Transition words can help you compare and contrast, show sequence, show cause and effect, highlight important ideas, and progress smoothly from one idea to the next. Such transition words include "furthermore", "in fact" and "in addition to". You can also use chronological transitions, such as "firstly", "secondly" and "thirdly".[3]
- The supporting sentences are the meat of your paragraph, so you should fill them with as much evidence to support your topic sentence as possible. Depending on the topic, you can use facts, figures, statistics and examples or you can use stories, anecdotes and quotes. Anything goes, as long as it is relevant.[1]
- In terms of length, three to five sentences will usually be enough
to cover your main points and adequately support your topic sentence,
but this will vary greatly depending on the topic and the length of the
paper you are writing.[3]Write a concluding sentence. The concluding sentence of your paragraph should tie everything together and reiterate the main point of your topic sentence, albeit in different words. A good concluding sentence will reinforce the idea outlined in your topic sentence, but now it has all the weight of the evidence or arguments contained in your supporting sentences behind it. After reading the concluding sentence, the reader should have no doubt as to the accuracy or relevance of the paragraph as a whole.[2]
- The concluding sentence of the paragraph should basically reword the the topic sentence, while drawing in some of the information presented in the body of the paragraph for support.
- For example, in a paragraph dealing with the topic "Why is Canada a
great place to live?" The concluding sentence might look something like
"From all the evidence provided above, such as Canada's fantastic health
care provisions, its top-notch education system and its clean, safe
cities, we can conclude that Canada is indeed a great place to live."[2] Know when to move on to a new paragraph. Sometimes it
can be difficult to tell where one paragraph should end and another
begin. Luckily, there are a number of guidelines you can follow which
can make the decision to move on to a new paragraph an obvious one. The
most basic guideline to follow is that every time you start to discuss a
new idea, you should move on to a new paragraph. Paragraphs should
never contain more than one central idea. If a given idea has multiple
points or facets, then each individual aspect of the idea should be
given its own paragraph.[1]
- A new paragraph is also used each time you are contrasting two points or presenting each side of an argument. For example, if your topic is "should civil servants receive lower salaries?" one paragraph would deal with the arguments supporting lower pay for civil servants, while the other paragraph would provide arguments against it.[1]
- Paragraphs make a piece of writing easier to comprehend and give readers a "break" between new ideas in order to digest what they have just read. If you feel that the paragraph you are writing is becoming too complex, or contains a series of complex points, you may want to think about splitting it up into individual paragraphs.[1]
- When writing a paper, the introduction and conclusion should always
be given their own paragraphs. The introductory paragraph should define
the aim of the paper and what it hopes to achieve, while also giving a
brief outline of the ideas and issues it will go on to discuss. The
concluding paragraph provides a summary of the information and arguments
contained in the paper and states in clear terms what the paper has
shown and/or proven. It may also introduce a new idea, one that opens
the reader's mind to the questions raised by the paper.[1] 4. Review Your ParagraphCheck your paragraph for spelling and grammar. Once you have finished writing, it is essential that you re-read your paragraph two or three times to check it for misspelled words and poor grammar. Spelling mistakes and bad grammar can significantly impact the perceived quality of your paragraph, even if the ideas and arguments it contains are of a high quality. It is very easy to overlook small mistakes when writing, so don't skip this step, even if you're in a rush.[2]
- Ensure that each sentence has a subject and that all proper nouns are capitalized. Also make sure that all of the subjects and verbs agree with each other and that you use the same tense across the entire paragraph.[2]
- Use a dictionary to double check the spelling of words that you are unsure about, don't just assume that they are correct. You can also use a thesaurus to find synonyms for words, if you feel like you are using the same term too much.
- Check your paragraph for the proper use of punctuation, making sure that you use marks such as commas, colons, semicolons and ellipses in the correct context.
Check your paragraph for coherency and style. Not only should the technical aspects of your writing be spot on, but you should also try to achieve a certain clarity in your writing, as well as stylistic flow. You can do this by varying the length and format of your sentences and by using transitional words and a varied vocabulary.[1]- The point of view of your writing should remain consistent throughout the paragraph, and indeed, the entire paper. For example, if you are writing in the first person (e.g., "I believe that...") you should not switch to a passive voice ("it is believed that") halfway through.
- However, you should also try to avoid beginning every sentence with "I think..." or "I contend that..." Try to vary the format of your sentences, as this will make the paragraph more interesting for the reader and help it to flow more naturally.
- For beginner writers, it is better to stick to short, to-the-point sentences which clearly express your point. Long, rambling sentences can very quickly become incoherent or fall victim to grammatical errors, so try to avoid them until you gain more experience as a writer.
Decide if your paragraph is complete. Once you have re-read the paragraph and fixed any grammatical or stylistic errors, you should have one more glance over it to determine whether it is complete. Try to look at the paragraph objectively and decide whether it sufficiently supports and develops your topic sentence, or whether it needs a few more details or additional evidence to back up your claims.[3]- If you feel that the main claim of your topic sentence is sufficiently supported and well-developed by the contents of the rest of your paragraph, then your paragraph is probably complete. However, if any important aspect of the topic remains unexplored or unexplained or if the paragraph is shorter than three sentences, it probably needs a little more work.[3]
- On the other hand, you may decide that your paragraph is too long and contains superfluous or tangential content. If this is the case, you should edit the paragraph so it contains only the most relevant information.
- If you feel that all of the content is necessary to your point, but the paragraph is still too long, you should think about breaking it up into several smaller, more specific paragraphs.
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Simple Sentences
A common weakness in writing is the lack of varied sentences. Becoming aware
of three general types of sentences--simple, compound, and complex--can help you
vary the sentences in your writing.
The most effective writing uses a variety of the sentence types explained below.
1. Simple Sentences
A simple sentence has the most basic elements that make it a sentence: a subject, a verb, and a completed thought.
Examples of simple sentences include the following:
The use of compound subjects, compound verbs, prepositional phrases (such as "at the bus station"), and other elements help lengthen simple sentences, but simple sentences often are short. The use of too many simple sentences can make writing "choppy" and can prevent the writing from flowing smoothly.
A simple sentence can also be referred to as an independent clause. It is referred to as "independent" because, while it might be part of a compound or complex sentence, it can also stand by itself as a complete sentence.
Tip: If you use many simple sentences in an essay, you should consider revising some of the sentences into compound or complex sentences (explained below)
2. Compound Sentence
A compound sentence refers to a sentence made up of two independent clauses (or complete sentences) connected to one another with a coordinating conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions are easy to remember if you think of the words "FAN BOYS":
Coordinating conjunctions are useful for connecting sentences, but compound sentences often are overused. While coordinating conjunctions can indicate some type of relationship between the two independent clauses in the sentence, they sometimes do not indicate much of a relationship. The word "and," for example, only adds one independent clause to another, without indicating how the two parts of a sentence are logically related. Too many compound sentences that use "and" can weaken writing.
Clearer and more specific relationships can be established through the use of complex sentences.
Tip: If you rely heavily on compound sentences in an essay, you should consider revising some of them into complex sentences (explained below).
3. Complex Sentences
A complex sentence is made up of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses connected to it. A dependent clause is similar to an independent clause, or complete sentence, but it lacks one of the elements that would make it a complete sentence.
Examples of dependent clauses include the following:
Dependent clauses begin with subordinating conjunctions. Below are some of the most common subordinating conjunctions:
The dependent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by the independent clause, as in the following:
Conversely, the independent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by the dependent clause, as in the following:
4. Beginning Sentences with "And" or "Because"
Should you begin a sentence with "and" or "but" (or one of the other coordinating conjunctions)?
The short answer is "no." You should avoid beginning a sentence with "and," "or," "but," or the other coordinating conjunctions. These words generally are used to join together parts of a sentence, not to begin a new sentence.
However, such sentences can be used effectively. Because sentences beginning with these words stand out, they are sometimes used for emphasis. If you use sentences beginning with one of the coordinating conjunctions, you should use these sentences sparingly and carefully.
Should you begin a sentence with "because"?
There is nothing wrong with beginning a sentence with "because."
Perhaps some students are told not to begin a sentence with "because" to avoid sentence fragments (something like "Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon" is a sentence fragment), but it is perfectly acceptable to begin a sentence with "because" as long as the sentence is complete (as in "Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, I did not see them at the station.")
Simple Compound and Complex
The most effective writing uses a variety of the sentence types explained below.
1. Simple Sentences
A simple sentence has the most basic elements that make it a sentence: a subject, a verb, and a completed thought.
Examples of simple sentences include the following:
- Joe waited for the train.
"Joe" = subject, "waited" = verb
- The train was late.
"The train" = subject, "was" = verb
- Mary and Samantha took the bus.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "took" = verb
- I looked for Mary and Samantha at the bus station.
"I" = subject, "looked" = verb
- Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station early but waited
until noon for the bus.
"Mary and Samantha" = compound subject, "arrived" and "waited" = compound verb
The use of compound subjects, compound verbs, prepositional phrases (such as "at the bus station"), and other elements help lengthen simple sentences, but simple sentences often are short. The use of too many simple sentences can make writing "choppy" and can prevent the writing from flowing smoothly.
A simple sentence can also be referred to as an independent clause. It is referred to as "independent" because, while it might be part of a compound or complex sentence, it can also stand by itself as a complete sentence.
Tip: If you use many simple sentences in an essay, you should consider revising some of the sentences into compound or complex sentences (explained below)
2. Compound Sentence
A compound sentence refers to a sentence made up of two independent clauses (or complete sentences) connected to one another with a coordinating conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions are easy to remember if you think of the words "FAN BOYS":
- For
- And
- Nor
- But
- Or
- Yet
- So
- Joe waited for the train, but the train was late.
- I looked for Mary and Samantha at the bus station, but they arrived at the station before
noon and left on the
bus before I arrived.
- Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, and they left on the
bus before I arrived.
- Mary and Samantha left on the bus before I arrived, so I did not see them at the bus station.
Coordinating conjunctions are useful for connecting sentences, but compound sentences often are overused. While coordinating conjunctions can indicate some type of relationship between the two independent clauses in the sentence, they sometimes do not indicate much of a relationship. The word "and," for example, only adds one independent clause to another, without indicating how the two parts of a sentence are logically related. Too many compound sentences that use "and" can weaken writing.
Clearer and more specific relationships can be established through the use of complex sentences.
Tip: If you rely heavily on compound sentences in an essay, you should consider revising some of them into complex sentences (explained below).
3. Complex Sentences
A complex sentence is made up of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses connected to it. A dependent clause is similar to an independent clause, or complete sentence, but it lacks one of the elements that would make it a complete sentence.
Examples of dependent clauses include the following:
- because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon
- while he waited at the train station
- after they left on the bus
Dependent clauses begin with subordinating conjunctions. Below are some of the most common subordinating conjunctions:
- after
- although
- as
- because
- before
- even though
- if
- since
- though
- unless
- until
- when
- whenever
- whereas
- wherever
- while
The dependent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by the independent clause, as in the following:
- Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, I did not see them at the station.
- While he waited at the train station, Joe realized that the train was late.
- After they left on the bus, Mary and Samantha realized that Joe was waiting at the train station.
Conversely, the independent clauses can go first in the sentence, followed by the dependent clause, as in the following:
- I did not see them at the station because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon.
- Joe realized that the train was late while he waited at the train station.
- Mary and Samantha realized that Joe was waiting at the train station after they left on the bus.
The term periodic sentence is used to refer to a complex sentence beginning with a dependent clause and
ending with an independent clause, as in "While he waited at the train station, Joe realized that the train was late."
Periodic sentences can be especially effective because the completed thought occurs at the end of it, so the first part of the sentence can build up to the meaning that comes at the end.
Tip: When the independent clause comes first, a comma should not be used to separate the two clauseshttps://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blogID=6910519743385565363#editor/target=post;postID=6158386474184332763Periodic sentences can be especially effective because the completed thought occurs at the end of it, so the first part of the sentence can build up to the meaning that comes at the end.
4. Beginning Sentences with "And" or "Because"
Should you begin a sentence with "and" or "but" (or one of the other coordinating conjunctions)?
The short answer is "no." You should avoid beginning a sentence with "and," "or," "but," or the other coordinating conjunctions. These words generally are used to join together parts of a sentence, not to begin a new sentence.
However, such sentences can be used effectively. Because sentences beginning with these words stand out, they are sometimes used for emphasis. If you use sentences beginning with one of the coordinating conjunctions, you should use these sentences sparingly and carefully.
Should you begin a sentence with "because"?
There is nothing wrong with beginning a sentence with "because."
Perhaps some students are told not to begin a sentence with "because" to avoid sentence fragments (something like "Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon" is a sentence fragment), but it is perfectly acceptable to begin a sentence with "because" as long as the sentence is complete (as in "Because Mary and Samantha arrived at the bus station before noon, I did not see them at the station.")
Simple Compound and Complex
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